Here are some lyrics I am working on ...

[Neil Davis]

Here are some lyrics I am working on ...

(c) copyright Neil Davis @55 High Road, Eastleigh, Edenvale, South Africa Nov 2008


Send me an email
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Verse 1

I'm just a lonely girl
I'm sad and alone in my room
im searching for somebody new
Maybe im looking for you
Send me an email and we can be friends
send me an email lets see where this ends

Verse 2

Maybe im looking for you
Maybe youre looking for me
Perhaps I'll like someone like you
Please send me an email lets see

Verse 3

I'm looking out for some mail
I'm looking out for a friend
i dont need another who just needs a lover
But send me an email, we'll see

Chorus:

I'm just a lonely girl
I'm sad and alone in the world
Im here on my own in my room
Im sitting here searching for you
I know that youre out there
I know that youre somewhere
Im looking for someone like you

Verse 4

There's so many people out there
I cant find a friend anywhere
Perhaps I need someone like you
Perhaps you're the friend that i want

Chorus:

I'm just a lonely girl
I'm sad and alone in the world
Im here on my own in my room
Im sitting here searching for you
I know that youre out there
I know that youre somewhere
Im looking for someone like you

Verse 5

I know I need more than a friend
Someone I can trust till it ends
Ive seen your picture You've seen mine
So send me an email and maybe some time
Maybe its you and maybe its me
Yes send me an email lets see

Chorus:

I'm just a lonely girl
I'm sad and alone in the world
Im here on my own in my room
Im sitting here searching for you
I know that youre out there
I know that youre somewhere
Im looking for someone like you

Bridge out:

I'm laughing at you cant you see
Youll never get someone like me
but im looking for fun and you look like the one
So send me an email, lets see




Title: Love lights up your eyes


(c) copyright Neil Davis @55 High Road, Eastleigh, Edenvale, South Africa Jan 2007 and Nov 2008

Registered with the US Copyright Office

Verse 1:

When I say that I'll miss you
When I say that I'll die
It's just a crazy feeling
When love lights up your eyes

Verse 2:

When I dance with you
Love lights up your eyes
I can feel it too
Moonlight in your sighs

It's in each step you take
It's in each move you make
We wont say goodbye
While love lights up your eyes



Chorus:

There's starlight in the skies
There's lovelight in your eyes
Shadows inside me die
When love lights up your eyes

If there's one thing im sure of
It's that I'd die for your love
Yes, you know that I'd die for you


Verse 3:

I know it's just you're style
When your fingers cross my face
and love shines all the while
On the path they softly trace


Chorus:

There's starlight in the skies
There's lovelight in your eyes
Shadows inside me die
When love lights up your eyes

If there's one thing im sure of
It's that I'd die for your love
Yes, you know that I'd die for you



Verse 4

Its always in your smile
Its always there in your eyes
If there's one thing im sure of
It's gotta be your love

I dreamed of us last night
Here in the pale moonlight
And, yes, I know it's true
I even dream of you


Chorus:


There's starlight in the skies
There's lovelight in your eyes
Shadows inside me die
When love lights up your eyes

If there's one thing im sure of
It's that I'd die for your love
Yes, you know that I'd die for you

(c) copyright Neil Davis @55 High Road, Eastleigh, Edenvale, South Africa Nov 2008
Lost girl

Verse 1

you were my dream, my everything
those happy days, and endless nights
And I was happy, you were crazy
we were in love, and i had you
and you were here, we were lovers
you were everything, i wanted
nothing else
in the whole world

Chorus

im a lost girl
im a a sad girl
in a wild world
wheres my mother
wheres my father
where are those good times

Verse 2

you were my dream, my everything
those happy days, and endless nights
you were my dream, my everything
in the wild world
I was happy,
we were crazy in love
and i was with you
nobody else in the wild world

Chorus

im a lost girl
im a a sad girl
in a wild world
wheres my brother
wheres my sister
where are those happy days

Verse 3

when you were near, you were my lover
you were everything i could want
they were the best of times
in the wild world

Chorus

im a lost girl
im a a sad girl
in a wild world
wheres my lover
wheres my lover
I still need you
in this wild world

(c) copyright Neil Davis @55 High Road, Eastleigh, Edenvale, South Africa Nov 2008

That's my girl
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Verse 1

Anyone know where I can find Bobby Lane
He's been messing with my girl again
I really dont know what she sees in him
But he's been messing with my girl again
I hear he's got an ear for a tune
I hear his notes are stolen from the angels
I hear he's movin' on my girl again
Some body saw them heading down the lane
Anyone know where I can find that Bobby Lane

Chorus

That's my girl, you're dancing with
That's my girl you're prancing with
That's my girl you're romancing with
She was mine, she made the sun shine
Thats my girl youre dancing with
Thats my girl, youre romancing with

Verse 2

Anybody seen that Bobby Lane
I hear hes been acting kinda mean
Messing with my girl again
I really dont know what she sees in him
Dont know what she sees in him
Dont know what she sees in him
But he's been messing with my girl again
Some body saw them heading down the lane
Anyone know where I can find that feller

Chorus

That's my girl, you're dancing with
That's my girl you're prancing with
That's my girl you're romancing with
She was mine, she made the sun shine
Thats my girl youre dancing with
Thats my girl, youre romancing with

Verse 3

Everybody knows that she's my girl
Everybody knows I love her for the world
Except that Bobby Lane
I hear he's been messing with my girl again
Anyone know where I can find that Bobby Lane

Chorus


That's my girl, you're dancing with
That's my girl you're prancing with
That's my girl you're romancing with
She was mine, she made the sun shine
Thats my girl youre dancing with
Thats my girl, youre romancing with

Bridge out:-

Mister Bobby Lane

c) copyright Neil Davis @55 High Road, Eastleigh, Edenvale, South Africa Nov 2008


Much work needed:

Verse 1

We are not ready to die
We've got so much to live for
We've got parties, and movies
And shopping, and games
We've got cars, and bars and food
We've got so much to do
And, sorry, no time to mess with you

Our future is bright
And who knows whats right
So live and let live
We've got so much to give

Verse 2

life is a thrill
have some fun and youll see
theres no need to kill
its bad for you, and for me

Verse 3

each wasted life is a tragedy
each death is a travesty
I dont care the excuse
It's just no use
Don't try to persuade us
Each life is so precious

Chorus

I'd rather be surfing
I'd rather be cruising
I'd rather be dreaming
I'd rather be driving
I'd rather be living
my life

in this u can trust
we will if we must
if its all cut and thrust
But
Cant you just take a pill
And not kill


Verse 4

we live for a smile
we live for some love
we live for a laugh
and we've had enough

Chorus

I'd rather be surfing
I'd rather be cruising
I'd rather be dreaming
I'd rather be driving
I'd rather be living
my life

in this u can trust
we will if we must
if its all cut and thrust
But
Cant you just take a pill
And not kill



Verse 5

we are free to laugh, to smile
to talk, to work, to live, to love

do you know how to laugh
do you know how to smile
do you know how to talk
do you know how to work
do you know how to live
do you know how to love
why not?
thats what i wanna know

do you understand giving or caring
why not?
thats what i wanna know
theres no reason good enough to die
If you don't get it then why?

Chorus

I'd rather be surfing
I'd rather be cruising
I'd rather be dreaming
I'd rather be driving
I'd rather be living
my life

in this u can trust
we will if we must
if its all cut and thrust
But
Cant you just take a pill
And not kill


Bridge out:

if we must we will
but its a much bigger thrill
to have fun in the sun
and enjoy everyone

I got a friend i must meet
who lives down the street
so if you can't take it easy
if the thought makes you queasy
take a pill take a pill take a pill

[Mary Anne Lonergan]

Hi Neil,
Good work, like your style of writing....hint, I have been told by critiques ...no more than five words per line (if possible) when writing lyrics for future songs as, its hard to put the music to all the words in one shot.
I'm going to included 'Blue Canadian Snow' on my site that took first place in a Nashville song lyrics contest...hope you like it...Mary Anne